Sunday, September 28, 2008

The good people's finest hour

One day, there were some people that didn’t have a home and were really thirsty and hungry so they decided to get one of the ships to go there and get a lot of water and food. And some wood to build a house with. So, one of the ships transformed and then went to the store to buy some water and food and wood and then went back. And then put everything in order and then they noticed they couldn’t make it out of wood because they didn’t have any nails to get the wood together. And then suddenly they found some very good pieces to build a house and then they built a house out of the pieces they found. And then they had a perfect house for all the food and then they decided to make the car they found one year ago better so they went to the shop and bought some really good prototype pieces. And then they had a good car that was invincible just like KITT but it didn’t have any guns so they went to the store again and bought some guns and a secret weapon and then the secret weapon had a wench in it so if any bad guys came they could use it to fling the bad guys back to where they came. But one day when they tried to use it it didn’t work, it malfunctioned and then the bad guys could get hold of the car and then they were trying to steal it because it had over a million dollars in it. But then it automatically used the wench and grabbed on to the house and the bad guys could not get the car off because the wench was tied in it so the bad guys could not get away with the car. And it used the wench and then the bad guys cut off the wench and tried to wrap the house but it didn’t work but then one shot is almost going to work because they have wrapped it and now are tying it completely so that they could steal the house and wreck it. And then they got a hold of the house and could easily get away with it but then suddenly the wench slipped and dropped the house and tried to get the car and got a hold of it but then it slipped off but then they roped it extremely hard and almost 100% got it but the wench isn’t working but then they tried and maybe one time they might have got it and then suddenly they got a hold of but then the rope broke but then the secret weapon fell off so now they could easily steal it but then they grabbed on to another car that they didn’t want, they wanted the shiny one because it had more money but it didn’t because they took all the money out and put it in the big ship and the bad guys didn’t know. And then they tried for a long time and couldn’t get a hold of it but then got a hold of it and wrecked it and the truck opened and they said “WHAT? THERE IS NO MONEY IN THE BACK OF IT! And then they noticed they put it in the big ship and then they tried to get a hold of the big ship but it is impossible because it is too heavy to winch but then they got a hold of it but then the wench slipped out. If they get a hold of the spoiler there is nothing they can do because it is never going to work and then they tried to whack the money out but then it slipped backwards and made it even harder. And then they got a hold of it but then the spoiler broke and then they said “Now we have no chance of getting that money” and then the ship recovered and then they kept trying until they could get it like that again, they tried as hard as they could to get that wench wrapped on and then they got a hold of it but broke the spoiler AGAIN and then tried really really hard but that just made it worse and then the good people said “Their grandmothers can’t even sit on a pin”. And then they got a hold of it again and broke the spoiler again and they the good people were like “AHAHAHAHAHA”. And then were like “you guys can’t even borrow a cup of sugar when you have a sneezing cold”. And what made it impossible is because there were so many guns and then they got a hold of one of the guns and then ripped off the spoiler but they will never get the money. And then they got tired and then they didn’t even notice they had one of the guns. TO BE CONTINUED.


This is a story that Colby made up while playing with Lego. He asked me to type it for him as he told it. - Mom

7 comments:

Mongoose said...

That was AWESOME! I love the good guys' one-liners.

Oh, and the polar bear in your fish tank is cool too. You have a wicked sense of humour. :)

Jackie S. Quire said...

Hey Colby,

Great story - you are very good at doing two things at once (telling a complicated story like that WHILE playing lego).

Can't wait to hear part 2!

Jackie

Matthew & Michele said...

We will await the continued story!

Kel P said...

Awesome Job Colby! I loved your story! Can't wait to hear the next part.

Love,
Aunt Kel

Matt, Kara, Hunter and Cavan said...

Wholy toledo, what a story!

Anonymous said...

Great story Colby.You are a great story teller. Can't wait to read what else is going to happen.You are doing a great blog.I am very,very proud of you and so is Poppy.I know he smiled when he saw your story. Nanny

OHN said...

Please don't make us wait for too long for part 2. Your mom has plenty of time to type it all for you ;)